Bad science writing and poor thinking don’t have to
go together, but when they do it’s insulting to the discerning reader, not to
mention a waste of time. I read literally dozens of précis and abstracts every
week to find good material suitable for my readership. Most don’t cut it –
they’re either too arcane or just hum-drum repetition – and I simply pass them
over. This one was so bad, on so many counts, that I was about to pass, and
then I saw the comment by Richard K.
Bernstein, MD
The title in Diabetes-in-Control
was, “Non-Caloric
Artificial Sweeteners May Induce Glucose Intolerance.” The subject is
controversial, so I looked to see if this one had anything new to add to the
discussion. The sub-head suggested it did: “Consumption of non-caloric
artificial sweeteners seems to induce glucose intolerance in mice and human
(sic) by altering gut microbiota.” The gut part – a trendy subject itself – was
a new twist, so I decided to read on.
“Many studies has showed…” the third sentence began.
Two errors: wrong number (singular) and wrong past particle in the progressive
tense. Okay, nobody’s perfect. Maybe the anonymous writer of this particular
newsletter piece for medical professionals is not a native English speaker, but
don’t they have an editor? I do. Okay, I’m being picky, and a little smug.
How about a lack of clarity? In the second
paragraph, try to make sense of these sentences: “Also to correlate findings in
obese patients, mice were fed high fat diet while giving them NAS or pure
sucrose as a control. This also showed that mice developed glucose intolerance
that were on commercial saccharides.” I don’t know where to begin! 1) Correlate
humans to mice? 2) Feed mice fat (rather than carbs) to make them fat? 3)
“Pure” sucrose? Is there any other kind? 4) And check out the syntax of the
second sentence: How about, “Mice that were on commercial saccharides developed
glucose tolerance.”
I know. This is not a blog about English grammar,
punctuation and syntax. It’s about how “gut microbiota may mediate NAS-induced
glucose intolerance.” There’s one short paragraph devoted to that. I quote it
here, verbatim, in its entirety:
“Gut
microbiota may mediate NAS-induced glucose intolerance. Fecal transplantation
was performed to test this theory, where transferring the microbiota
configuration from mice on normal-chow diet drinking commercial saccharin or
glucose as a control into normal-chow-consuming germ-free mice. Mice consuming
commercial saccharin that received microbiota exhibited impaired glucose
intolerance compared to mice consuming glucose after 6 days of fecal
transplantation (P<0.03).”
Hmmm. “…commercial saccharin or glucose as a
control…” This time it’s commercial saccharin or glucose. Last time “NAS or
pure sucrose.” Sucrose, as my readers know, is only 50% glucose. The other 50%
is fructose. And this time it’s “commercial saccharin” (a specific chemical
compound) vs. “commercial saccharides” that was the sweetener tested. And how
can “commercial saccharin or glucose” both be controls? And do I understand
that the mice who received “commercial saccharin” exhibited IGT while the mice
who consumed glucose did not? And do they mean “after 6 days of fecal
transplantation” or do they mean “6 days after fecal transplantation.”?
The Diabetes-in-Control piece then goes on to
describe two entirely different short and long term experiments of NAS in
humans. It doesn’t say how long the long-term study is – only that it is
ongoing and involves 381 non-diabetics. The short term study involved 7 people
for 7 days. The summation drew an audible chuckle from this reader: “Overall,
results from short and long-term human NAS consumer cohorts suggest that
individual have personalized response to NAS depending on differences in their
microbiota function.” Huh?!! There was no mention whatsoever of fecal
implantation in the Diabetes-in-Control write-up of either human experiment.
The last sentence was the pièce de résistance: “NAS consumptions seems to increase in the
obesity and glucose intolerance.” That is a verbatim
quote. No typos (on my part). Just poor writing, poor editing and poor
thinking.
Then I saw the comment by Bernstein, M.D., F.A.C.E.,
F.A.C.N, C.W.S., FCCWS, author of “Diabetes Solution.”
“They
used brand name powdered sweeteners that were all 96% sugars but were labeled
zero calories. At least 1 brand (Sweet and Low) used glucose. So they were
testing sugars rather than artificial sweeteners.”
So, am I piling on? Maybe so. Do I bask in the reflected
glory of the venerable Dr. Bernstein? Sure. We (those of us with impaired
glucose tolerance) all venerate him. But would I have bothered to write this up
if he had not commented on it. Probably not, because, without a subscription, I
only had access to the ABSTRACT on which this précis was based. But I was
shocked, shocked, to learn where this paper was published. You will be too: in Nature, a prominent scientific journal.
N.B.: The abstract in Nature is a good read. Its CONCLUSION: “Collectively, our results
link NAS consumption, dysbiosis and metabolic abnormalities, thereby calling
for a reassessment of massive NAS usage.” That
sounds reasonable to me.
If you want to know how your BG reacts to a
non-caloric sweetener, use your meter!
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